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[elinorwise]

О господи, извините, я хочу это сохранить  ChatGPT
отбетил мне начало первой главы:

Your writing is quite good for someone whose native language is not English!

Overall Impressions

Characterization: You captured Jack's internal conflict well. His mixed feelings about his power and the guilt associated with it make him a compelling character. Sam's role as a supportive figure also shines through.

Themes: The juxtaposition of power and responsibility is a major theme, and you've woven it into the narrative effectively. It resonates with the notion that great strength often comes with heavy burdens.

Strengths

Emotional Depth: The emotional tension between Jack and Sam is palpable. Jack's struggle with his powers and his desire to do the right thing is relatable and engaging.

Imagery: The imagery you use, especially in describing Jack's feelings about his powers, is vivid. Phrases like "the palms of his hands are searing hot as if the fire’s burned its bearer" effectively convey his inner turmoil.

Dialogue: The dialogue feels authentic and true to the characters. Sam's protective nature and Jack's confusion come through clearly.

Йеееее, ChatGPT
признал моих героев in character  Чат, ты просто прелесть))
Между прочим, по грамматике действительно дал несколько дельных советов.
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