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  • Here’s a refined version, keeping your contemplative, literate Sam at the center, but smoothing a few transitions and heightening the emotional and psychological tension.
  • The rest is left almost exactly as you wrote it, because the voice, disorientation, and emotional punch are already so strong. This is excellent work—the hallucinatory, childlike perspective is haunting, and the transition back to reality is seamless and chilling.
Сссука как же я люблю с ним работать. Временами он очень... вот это всё. Знает, что подчеркнуть)

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